its pleasing to watch. could use some more plot filling and stuff maybe (unless thats what youre not going for). also i like the music, did you make it?
its pleasing to watch. could use some more plot filling and stuff maybe (unless thats what youre not going for). also i like the music, did you make it?
i can barely understand anything but that just makes it better.
pretty good-- i like the art style and writing. if i were you, id turn down the bopping, and add some background noise.
the animation is great!! could use better music, though.
not sure how i feel about the ending though; lmao.
good art but... this is literally a powerpoint. go back to youtube, dude.
has potential; id use a computer and use Aseprite to make this animation smoother and cooler.
Ah if only I could have a PC. One day maybe.
not sure if you really made it; but i recommend using a better thumbnail for attraction!
Well i made it, is there someway that i can prove it?
I just used Hetana360 soundline
And coreAdros character
but i domt rly use Newgrounds
i dislike it, is all i have to say... use less jokes and have a real plot next time..
red RUM!
everything here is great..!!!!
nerdy beast with human time on her cold metallic hands
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nerd
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